It only takes a few words to make my day…
From a First Kiss(es) reader on Scribophile:
From a reader on Scribophile: I just read all 9 chapters. I was so dissapointed there weren’t more! I really like your characters, but the mystery of what is going on is killing me!
Of course I’ve offered to let her read the whole thing. Hehehehe. 
Total blush factor. Gotta love it when people have nothing but GOOD things to say.
Sweeeeeeeeeeet!
Uh oh – does it look like I’m stalking? *giggles* maybe I am.
I’d love to take a look at the whole thing! I know its still a bit rough, but I really was enjoying those chapters, and with all those hints of behind the scenes secrets, I just have to know what happens!
I was reading for pure enjoyment before, and will finish the same way. Then I’ll break out the red pen if thats what you want. Just let me know what you want and how to download it.
Oh – since you like the Paranormal, take a look at my contest entry – And Days Instead of Me – and let me know what you think. I’ve just started writing so my technique leaves much to be desired, but I like it. Hope you will.
I’m STILL so happy you liked it and would LOVE to send you the full MS to read as enjoyment.
An overall ‘story critique’ is something I get as much value on as the nitpicky stuff. 
Shoot me an email with the best email to respond to and I’ll send it. Let me know if you want a Word doc, Kindle file or Apple Pages file. 